Oh jeez that was really good. I'm really digging how much effort is put into each movement with speech patterns (like with the 'hold on babe' part). I also see a lot of spazkid's influence, unless it's emulated for cory in general, either/or it was crazy good! A small tidbit, the intro is just a tad too long. But nothing too serious.
Ha, maybe I subconsciously imitated spazkid because he was telling the story. I agree, on re-watch the intro does seem a tad long for what it is.
That was extremely good! The way you made the cartoon resemble a lot of the source material whilst adapting your own animation was really spot on! A small thing though was that I noticed the quality would sort of hop here and again? But regardless, awesome work!
Thanks for letting me know! I'll look into that for the next part :)
It's really hard to see what's going on with the flash being so large...
Thank you for your response it was very helpful and I changed the dimensions so you can view it better now if you would like :). Thanks
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Age 29, Male
Rocky Mountain College of Art
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Sleepytoons: Cory's Dodge Ball Story (Sleepycast Animated) 
Anime Club - Part 1 (Gunshow Comic Animation) 
Good Guys Part I 
